WRITING TASK
ABOUT A CRIME
Pharagraph 1:
Before the crime:
The murderer was drinking a coffee in a bar in the centre of Puigcerdà.
Who was there?
There were Lourdes and Monica in Cal Cofa, a hotel of Puigcerdà.
What were they doing?
The two girls were watching youtube in Monica’s bedroom.
Pharagraph 2:
Describe the main event:
What was the crime?
The crime was in Cal Cofa, in Monica’s bedroom.
Who did it?
Faust, an alcoholic teenager climb the hotel until Monica’s bedroom.
What did they do?
The two girls were watching the laptop when Faust enter in the bedroom. Then Faust removed the knife and kill Lourdes.
What did other people do while it was happening?
Monica’s father and mother, the owners of the hotel, were working when the murderer appeared.
Pharagraph 3:
What did people do after the crime happened?
Monica was in the bedroom when the murderer kill her friend. Faust came out of the hotel with blood on his t-shirt.
ABOUT A CRIME
Faust had planned a murder for months. He wanted to kill Lourdes. We don’t know why, but he wanted. On a sunny day, he was drinking a coffee in the center of Puigcerdà, near the Town Hall. Monica lives in a hotel.She and Lourdes and were in Monica’s bedroom. The two girls were watching youtube videos in Monica’s bedroom.
Then, when Faust finished his coffee, he walked to Cal Cofa. He climbed the hall of the hotel until Monica’s bedroom. Faust had entered inside the bedroom by the window. When he entered, the two girls were watching the laptop. Suddenly, the two girls became frightened and Faust took the knife and killed Lourdes. Monica’s father and mother, the owners of the hotel, were working when the murder happened.
Then, when the murderer was going downstairs, Monica called the police. Faust, was in the hotel hall trying to escape and the police arrested him. Now he is in prison and he will stay there for 18 years.
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